Wednesday, August 07, 2013

Camp poem

As I Enter the entrance of the cave,
I can hear the ghostly sounds echoing in the sloped walls
I can see the threaded cobwebs hanging from the ceiling
I can feel the water streaming into my shoes like there had just been a mini tsunami
Then all of a sudden my torch flickered and went out and I think myself am I lost?

2 comments:

  1. Awesome Harry
    I love your poem, it has great detail and I like how you said threaded cobwebs instead of cobwebs.

    Keep up the great work
    Well Done

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  2. wow i like the spooky parts good work

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